Again, nice pictures, but you really aren't fulfilling the assignment. That is, what are your feelings about being in Japan? What are your first impressions? While your photos speak a lot, you need text to go along with them.
People will read Arrival II before Arrival I and so might not understand how you are connecting the text you do have.
You have some really nice photos, but where is your text?
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Again, nice pictures, but you really aren't fulfilling the assignment. That is, what are your feelings about being in Japan? What are your first impressions? While your photos speak a lot, you need text to go along with them.
ReplyDeletePeople will read Arrival II before Arrival I and so might not understand how you are connecting the text you do have.